lordgluzman

UM UM UM, It was OK for a new person. So keep on improving But the poem is to short. It gets a little bit boring because you are writing ...

(Plucking with a bass) (Lightly the cello comes in) Did one day in your life Some one made you cry? Or made you heart feel like to die? You’re the ...

Ignorance, stupidity Is all there seems to be. Shallow hearts and minds. The opposite of me. Your not alone. I know your pain. And i would like to bare. This ...

LOL, that was so funny I showed to some of my freinds that went over to my house, they all said it was funny and coolio! Keep on writeing man, ...

Interesting, so you are a king and am your sex slave. I AM JOKEING !!!!! How will your little brother respond to that?

I actually really like this as it is, even though some of the suggestions would add to it more. Did you write this for a band you are in or ...

I am on it!

PUNCTUATION....... Robert when you get back to Finland I'll make you punctuate your every last song and poem. :D I hope when I move back I will still live in ...

Coolio, I will give you a star, but I don't get it in some parts. For example what is Blink 182? Also I think you should take out: Give them ...

Where do u live? Haha! In England the standard price is £2 for one pill! Just saying :P No he is not British he is from Tennessee, Nashville .

That was pretty coolio but most of the rhyming was forced, when I was reading your poem I under stood that you were telling drugs are bad but in some ...

My words treed me apart Pain came to my heart My tongue went beyond time My respect declined It went beyond time Memories stayed behind I just wanted to be ...

Thanks but I don't really know what then should I add.

Name: Lord Robert Race: Wood Elf Nation: Wood Elves Class: Commander of the offense Wood Elves War-gear: Dragon skin Appearance: Handsom,Blond hair,War lover Personality: No fear of death Background: