lordgluzman

I see that you are respectful to veterans and that is good + the poem was good but I would say that that was only the begging. It was too ...

AWSOME!!!! This is much better then the WEED song you wrote. I am now happy again. The stroy was coolio and interesting. Except the problem is I think you should ...

It was interesting but..... It was toooooooooooo short for me. The only reason it looks to long is because you made huge space. But still you had a good point ...

Fantastic, great, superb and great again. This poem is really powerful It is like you telling a story of a criminal. It brings in moral as well + your poem ...

I am sorry Vlad this time I will have to put you down... What you are doing is wrong!!! For example I try to tell people that drugs are bad ...

You are a great American and God bless USA!!!!!!! Great poem but I think you should have maybe include some of the American history as well. Maybe you could write ...

The Tortured Child By Robert (Crazy guitar solo) First person (High and calm voice): In life we grew up with smiles… We did not know much about the evil styles… ...

Not bad but you could have done it longer. Then it be better!!! rite now you are just pooting in couple of words. But not bad keep on writeing.

Dang Girl!!! :) I guess all the boyfriends gotta be ready for you. JOKEING!!!. The poem was really good. I think if you will turn it more into a lyric ...

“Drones!!!” he yelled “Everyone get to cover!” (Drones are the last ranked specie Covenant. They are size of a normal human, but they really look like insects. They can also ...

I saw him crying in pain and screaming “Is that all? Is that all you? Mother F$%@ers!” As he swore he ran straight at the last brute. Next second I ...

Hey! It's me. I am glad that you are back and you wrote another good poem. I really like it. The poem is peacfull and pretty but can you please ...

LOL, That was good. It was funny, good words were used, and it had a great idea. This poem is really unique which is really good. But it was confuseing ...

Maybe it shouldn't be a poem, maybe it should be a dialogue or a script. But any ways lets get back to your writing itself. I think it was too ...

It was good because I could see your effort in this poem but It was confuseing for me. Because in the poem you are saying that the love you have ...