lordgluzman

LOL, What subject is this. Is Yoha your teacher? If he is he is going to be pist! Ow and dude can you please teach me how you sed pictuers ...

OK........Um not bad, but too short and the rhyming wasn't the best but the theme was good. So basically you have a really good imagination you just need to improve ...

1) The descriptions in your poem are good! 2) The words used in your poem are good! 3) The theme for the poem I didn't really get... Can you PM ...

We really do good as team!!! I think we should this more.

Dang girl! I am not an emo but I sure do like goth style. In fact I wish I would be a goth in some ways. I think lyrics are ...

That is a sweet poem. It is a about winter rite? I thought it was good but I think it would be better if you would add some more color, ...

Smoke it then Leave it (In the back round you hear people puffing and sniffing cocaine) First person (High and calm voice): The lonely teen makes a puff… He really ...

Thank you again. LOL

Thank you

They Must Fight Those men have a family They love them graciously But it is time for them to go Our jobs is to pray That in this world they ...

I liked the poem! Not all writers make their poems that long and that is good that you have a great imagination and you can stretch your poem. SO GREAT ...

Okay... Let me think.... I liked the poem the words were good and your letareture is really good. But I didn't get what was the poem about. Can you PM ...

Ow and the two wrong words are foregotten & beatiful They should be forgotten and beautiful.

WOW, really good. I have to say you have a great imagination. Every single poem of yours is great! but You have two wrong spelled words and I got a ...

that was coolio!!! I like the idea it is really unusual for people finding the good sights of the villains