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Re: Hard Stand Chapter 7 The Broken Skull
Sam quickly ran to Brandon grabbed his bloody hand and cried “You are going to be ok.” Brandon did nothing but shook his head and closed his eyes. Chapter 7 ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: Got his butt kicked in class
Dude this song is like rock and roll!!! I could sing it in my head. So great and coolio dude. YEA GREAT JOB!!!!
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: All The Little Butterflies (EDITED)
That is one of the best stories you ever did. But I am having a feeling that you put in extra adjectives this time for example: the crystal clear rain ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Never Coming Back (Punk Rock)
Never Coming Back (Bell) (First Person sings calm and lightly): As I look through the window I see the beautiful stars of light Hoping that you had there a safe ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Unaware
UM UM UM...UM You know October girl you got talent. I can really see it, you use good words you have powerfull sentences and I can see that, but you ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: LIFE
Okay that was a good stanza but I hope that wasn't your whole poem. So If you can put it in a nother long poem.
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: OH Finland
I don't know the difference betwenn Ow and OH. Can any body tell me?
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Smoke it then Leave it (Heavy Metal)
Thank You guys for your support!
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: OH Finland
Finland Oh Finland… Your soil is where I stand Oh Finland… The wonderful place where you can hold the magical, white snow with your bare hand Oh Finland… The land ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: The Legend of the Sainted One
He watched in horror as some tried to run but before darkness’ embrace they fell away from the Son SON SHOULD BE SUN That was the only mistake in the ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Silky Bob caught!
Ok I will make a nother one and it will be true
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Silky Bob caught!
Silky Bob caught! By Robert Gluzman New York city, New York December 12, 1938. Yesterday at night when we were dreaming, one of the most evil and dirtiest criminals was ...
Dec 17, 2008 -
Re: I Used To Fly
OK that was good and really sad which was good because you were telling us your feelings. But the flying and the cancer doesn't really come together. Next time try ...
Dec 17, 2008 -
Re: Poisoned Razor Blades
Thank you too
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: [deleted]
Ok now I get it. Thanks. You got a great theme!
Dec 14, 2008
