lordgluzman

I changed it.

SUPER GOOD! You had moral and the theme. But I did felt that some of the rhyming was forst + I think that this part doesn't fit in: And Mom ...

Pretty good for a new guy! I thought the best part was the first one! See you at school! Cheers Dude!

OK.... I am sorry if I will make you hate me for saying that your poem sucked! UNTILL I READ THE ENDING. YES....WHEN I READ THE LAST PART OF THE ...

If this is a true thing about you show this poem to the people that piss you off! They will maybe listen to you because this poem is so good. ...

This was super interesting! But I don't remember the city name in Warhammer and Dwarfs do tie up their hair with rings. But I was hoping that the dwarfs would ...

Nice! I would call this Rock man! But can you PM me and explain what did you mean in this stanza? Oh Lord, how could you leave me, leave me ...

Delightful Sinner (Screaming and roaring) Your time is up! But your sins couldn’t stop Isn’t this amusing? Hell! Is now your place Even God doesn’t want to see your face! ...

Yesterday was alote of snow man. I and Lord Anzius had a snow ball fight! But dude I don't now if you remeber or know the teacher "Hilkka Ow'Doad". She ...

I love Nightwish! Are you from Finland by any chance? Because Nightwish is a Finnish band.

Thank you for the comments. But can any of you 3 explain to me why you think it was funny? Or why you thought the screaming was funny?

It was good. But on some parts I felt boared. Also....You don't have to do the words bold. But other wise it was good

It was not bad but I thought it was too short! But you have punctuation which is good. I gut confused on the very last part: So why do I ...

first I thought that a human died that you new but it was a fish. Thank you God!!!!!!!!! But after I found out that it was a fish a got ...

I thought the Vikings did rule Finland for a while. Didn't they?