lordgluzman

is not exactly telling that life shits. It explains that you have to stand up for your self.

I guess this is Heeavy Metal (Yay). If it is not Metal then it's propobly rap. I liked the words and the emotions but it was too short for me. ...

OMG, I can't stop laughing so can't my friends that are reading this behind my back. Give me please couple seconds..............Man! You are the funniest poem writer on this website. ...

If you are depressed or EMO please don't be angry. This song just explains that you shouldn't be depressed. Matter of fact my EMO freinds like this lyric. (Calm) Every ...

Sounds interesting. I am waiting for it.

Hey, Pretty good this reminds me of a song I wrote "Never Coming Back" But The girl that I loved in my song died so we didn't really comeback like ...

(Roaring) They just can’t stop! Kicking! Hitting! Fucking! Getting out of my face! (Calm) No, they just don’t care They don’t believe what is or not fare (Roaring) They will ...

Robert maybee.... That is actually my name. Emanuel Asher Elias Olli Anzius Stewi

That was really good. I wont grade the grammar or the punctuation because I am bad at it. You brought emotions which is good but I didn't get what you ...

Thanks! Yea it's metal.

Poems don't have to rhyme. Sometimes when you rhyme too much the poem goes bad. Very well retten. I liked the moral and emotions that you showed.

This song was pretty good but not your best. I think you need to work on the lyrics more. I think this should be in the poem section.

Totally awesome Anzius! I hope the song was about me. Why you didn't tell me at school that you got new songs. But I have to admit that the punctuation ...

Hey dude I actually sang it out loud, I think I am pretty good. I will come to school and try to sing it. Maybe we can use this song ...

Hey Mr. Who What kind of man are you? Hey Mr. Who You were an actor yesterday Hey Mr. Who You will be a governor today! Hey Mr. Who What ...