lordgluzman

Not bad! But it was too short for me. I hope people wont grade this song bad because of the language and the misspelling. This is just what rapers do. ...

I didn't really like it to be honest because the most important stuff you wanted to show were in the dark. But I have to say the background was good. ...

Nice man! I liked it. But lots of people around here will maybe get offended but I don't give. I disagree with some stuff that you wrote about weed and ...

Okay I will try. What I usually like to write about is morals and justice songs.

(Rough) Shall we go into her head? (Heavy melody) As she sleep's quietly in bed… (Heavy melody) Into her mind With a colorful world, so kind! But there is still ...

Actually our homework was just simply describe something.

Bananas Every morning, every evening I am ready for a fruit that has smooth and soft skin. Sometimes it has a smell; it also can be really squishy when it’s ...

It was good! You deserve a star man. I have nothing to correct you with. I haven't read a good poem about America in a long time. The only part ...

Actually I have a melody for this song. If you would hear this under my melody the rhyming would be fine. But I understand what you meen.

(Calm) As the bullets are fired over your head (You won’t run you will fight instead) No matter what stands in your way you will stand tall (But without my ...

Thanks

Hey pretty cool. I like it! If this is a true thing you should stand tall and give or send this song to that kid you like. If a girl ...

This is only an introduction because it is super short. I have noothing more to say but if you finnish this song it will be good. But if not then ...

Okay...... Number one this should be in the poem section. Number two it was to short. Number three some of the rhyming was forced. Number 4 It is a pretty ...

This song was awesome. I made a kinda heavy melody for it. I think you would have liked it. The emotions you brought were really strong in away. The rhyming ...