lordgluzman

Thanks, I respect you for making it heavy metal! This song was awesome, it had everything. Justice, moral, beat, rhythm, and allot more. But the best part of this lyric ...

LOL, I didn't get the song but it still sounds so cool! I don't know why.

You need to add more punctuation, The song was kinda short for me. But it was really fun to read, I enjoyed your song. But if it is a heavy ...

I will put this in mined. Yea I do have a heavy melody for this. :twisted:

To be honest I didn't get the humour. Your song is still pretty cool, but to tell you the truth I got bored in the end. Don't blame yourself it's ...

I read your message. So I want to apologize, I guess I didn't get the lyrics.

Nice world you got there: Evil, sweet, happy and crazy! Best part of this picture that you got Packman! Wohoooo! Yea! I am begging to like this picture a lot. ...

Okay.... That was totally cool, awesome and funny. I really like your poems because they are all funny. I have only one thing to crit: So my cousin and I ...

To be honest I didn't like this song. It was okay.... You need to add punctuation to show the mood of the song. I also was hoping to see more ...

The only way we can know what type of song you are writing is if you put punctuations. To show if your angry or if the song is fast. So ...

What the heck. You guys should comment not just write 5 words. This song was awesome especially if it's Metal! Is it metal? It better be. You got a perfect ...

Ha, If this is about you keep strong. Honestly nobody (Except one) cheated on me. But they didn't exactly cheat they just liked another guy. Anyways this song was good. ...

(Roar) (Screams) Hear this loud shit mother fucker! (Stretched) (Screams) (Fast guitar solo) (Roar) You just can’t wait for me to get injected! So then I could get infected! Then ...

OK I suck at this I don't know any of this guys. LOL. But the dinosaur looks familiar. But any ways this is a really good idea. I guess it's ...

This is pretty cool and funny. Your idea was perfect! Honestly I can't fined any stuff you should correct. But I kinda didn't like the feet and the hands. Hey, ...