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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Dance of Nations (WIP)

    This is a post from Storm_Bringer that was posted in an evil ghost thread (in other words I don't know why/how it got there). Hopefully he doesn't mind me copying ...

    Apr 18, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Dance of Nations (WIP)

    This is not the original post. Actually I'm not sure why this one is here. I appreciate your comments but please refer to the earlier post as it explains some ...

    Apr 18, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Dance of Nations (WIP)

    I agree on the immaturish nature of the section you quoted. It even felt that way as I wrote it. I've been contemplating alternative methods of getting that point across, ...

    Apr 17, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello all

    Thanks for the heads up on the rules. Actually "Que" is another pun. It's a reference to a half-farthing which is part of a cultural idiom (I believe in England ...

    Apr 17, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Dance of Nations (WIP)

    It was a dark room, for the most part. Except for the light that shed itself on the center of the room. One could almost smell the wood floors. And ...

    Apr 17, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Dance of Nations (WIP)

    It was a dark room, for the most part. Except for the light that shed itself on the center of the room. One could almost smell the wood floors. And ...

    Apr 17, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Back To Our Roots

    Overall, a great piece. It definitely expresses some (I believed needed) idealism, that our generation often tends to lack. I did get a little annoyed with the use of the ...

    Apr 17, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Disrupted

    I believe I like it. I have to agree with some of the other posts. There were a couple spots that seemed a bit rough. The two lines mentioned in ...

    Apr 17, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello all

    Hello everyone. I just joined up because one of my professors encouraged me to write and while I have no qualms about writing itself... for some reason I don't like ...

    Apr 17, 2009


The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they.
— TheMythMaster