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Everyone else picked the mistakes.... I DONT HAVE ANYTHING!!! *sobs incessantly* Write more!!! I'm loving this series. ADDICTED!!

I absoulutley LOVE IT!! The only part I found confusing is when she told him he forgot something, and she never TOLD him what he forgot. This portrays her as ...

Chapter One I revised it. Please edit. "Who even likes the water?" Abby asked me. I rolled my eyes, and dripping with sarcasm, I told her, "Just about all the ...

Hey Samantha! I was so hooked, didn't notice anything 'cept a couple of repetions. LOVED IT!! write more. -Lollipop ___________ Yeah. And while I'm at it, I'll just go jump ...

(Laughing uncontrollably) Th-th-this..HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

I saw a couple little mistakes. "Luckily, the movie hadn’t even started yet. when we walked into the dark theater with are load of junk food," Change are to our. ...

I love it!! I really do. By the way, on your Portfollio or whatever, the page with the picture of the girl, is that you? I'm really curious. SERIOUSLY!!! When ...

Do a sequel!! I NEEED A SEQUEL!! *starts hyperventilating* PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

I hate him that ASS!! no i dnt. I absoulutley love him. My stomach literally dropped at that part. LOVED IT!!

OH! OH! OH! Me too! :oops:

I LOVE IT keep writing i was so sucked into it i couldn't find anything. WRITE WRITE WRITE!!

I couldn't find any mistakes but. O.M.G. That was great! I was kinda confused in the begginning, but it was a okay hook. I really like the way Jane isn't ...

I added a couple things and changed mom to sis. Is it better or worse? Should I continue? Enjoy! Chapter One The front door slammed shut as I walked to ...

"Come back!" I squealed, chasing him around the park. Walker stopped suddenly and I toppled over him. He tickled me until I was earning the attention of everyone in ear ...

UGH!! why why why why why why!!! wt he double hockey sticks! NOOOOO! i dont like dying! nooooo! make it stop. whhhhhy? HES SO AWESOME!! it was good. except for ...