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Re: FANTACII! ~ CHP 1
i like your friends story. it gets me how the writter connects with the reader. use more vivid language. tell your friend to post chapter 2.
Wed Dec 31, 2008 4:23 am -
Re: FANTACII! ~ CHP 1
i like your friends story. it gets me how the writter connects with the reader. use more vivid language. tell your friend to post chapter 2.
Wed Dec 31, 2008 4:23 am -
Re: FANTACII! ~ CHP 1
i like the story its connects with the audience. tell ur friend she is preety gud
Wed Dec 31, 2008 4:20 am