lluvialover

I really don't like how this is stereotyped, nothing is interesting and original. Why does the most popular girl has to be blond with blue eyes, and another girl is ...

What does this have to do with Penelope of Odysseus? well this so far has been a frequent question, so I'll finally answer it. First of all...this is just the ...

nice story man, I read it all. I actually thought that the Jesse guy was that guy with curly bown hair that she saw, but that he was not with ...

Worlds Collide "She's on!" he couldn't help, but smile seeing so dear of an image: the eyes of a clear summer sky, the dark brown hair, framing her round face, ...

I love this. It's so original. It was apleasure to read. can;t wait till more is posted =)

Although short, this poem has a perfect flow. It creates intense emotions. The only thing I could suggest is making it longer. I like it =)

I like this a lot. To tell you the truth it wasn't long enough for me, so I can't wait to read some more! =)

I undertand this story in my own way I guess. So the preacher makes a fool of himself by believing in the toaster being the God. Yet even after falling ...

“ Why return so early on such a warm Saturday, hone? “ the massive figure in an orange robe asked, a slightly slender lady with golden round glasses standing beside ...

the words sound too formal for a normal conversation, as if they are pretending to be professors. Their fanciness is just a little over the top. But maybe I am ...

I really enjoyed readiing this, it's like I actually lived in the story. It sounds so real and beautiful =)

wow! great imagery! although, No offense, but I never thought so much could be in a head of a thirteen year old. I have acouple of problems with it. Maybe ...

this poem has a great moral message. I really like it, but it didn't have a beat or some kind of rhythm to it. When you just read it, it ...

like this although i noticed you used the same looking character in Eternity. I will keep on reading =)

Everyone, thank you for your comments =) I did intend for Deniss to sound creepy and I am glad it worked out. Watch for the next part of my story ...