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Re: Destiny's Call: Chapter Three
Sunrise was unwelcoming, as it came earlier than Thunderstorm had thought. She lifted her head to see Sunhawk back in the room waking the cadets up. She looked tired, as ...
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Re: Love takes time to find
Yeah it is supposed to say that and I will fix line 5
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Re: The Voyage of the Pied Piper Ch4
I had never had so much attention before in my life. It all happened in a blur. Right after I fought and the captain welcomed me aboard, everyone seemed to ...
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Re: Chapter two
As I am the first to review this and rate this I will tell you that there are some grammar errors but I really don't want to go into all ...
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Re: Love takes time to find
Love takes time to understand but when you find it you will glance And look upon the days you've said what a maze love is Loyal is the love I ...
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Re: Do your characters talk to you?
Yeah they talk are right non stop I am like I know I created you and all but can you pleas be quiet
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Re: Bluebell Blues
French Vanilla, come in several variations; all of them have their own assortment of toppings. After all, no two scoops are exactly the same. Two scoops. What I wouldn't give ...
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Re: Kings
Chapter8 of 1 Samuel Read 8:10-18 : 19, but nevertheless the people refused to obey the voice of Samuel. Now, we always looking at other people and what they have ...
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Re: Diverting Illusions: Chapter Two
Taint opened his eyes to find himself in a moonlit clearing, the leaves turned to silver. Roulette was sitting a few feet away with his tail curled over his paws, ...
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Re: XxJojoxX Custom Avatar
cool
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Re: deleted
Sister God Please you the lord is doing something in your soul because the will preach. I love the part when you said The snapping out of the phase of ...
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Re: Animal Freak- Part Two
So do you like animals? Cause this story is great have you any others? How long have you been on here? I am new here as you can see I ...
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Re: Ch 10: Careless Lovers
Even though it took me a long time to read it it was great. I really love it I just love the part when you said We left Scarlet and ...
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Re: Crying Softly
I really love this what inspired you to write this. It is so good it is going to make me cry. So keep up all the goodness you have going ...
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Re: The Dark Angel of Peace Chapter 2
I just love this piece you can just feel the story drawing you in closer and closer till bam!!!!!!!!!!! It takes you in all the way you really have to ...
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