-
Re: Destiny's Call: Chapter Two
They started home near the break of dawn two days later, to maximize the distance traveled that day. By now it was midday and they had traveled several miles from ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Nightshade Chapter 3
[quote]What he saw was a breathtakingly beautiful woman with ice blue eyes. One moment they looked like ocean, another they looked like newborn stars. The woman was leaning over a ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Antolsai - 2
The last parts and the middle was the best parts.
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Fallen Angel
I just wanted to cry when I great paragraph 5 and 6 it was so powerful I just wanted to cry so bad. It has so much detail and emotion ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Time
And he must have fallen asleep, because when he opened his eyes, he was somewhere quite different thank the small, cold room high up in the city. But looking around, ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: No Tears Left To Shed
Hide your dream in your eyes since he just goes and dies.That is my favorite part I love it oh and there are not that many mistakes because the way ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Singer?
Okay I did not know that thanks :D
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Mythos (Chapter Five)
At least I’m not high on caffeine.” She rolled over off her stomach and propped herself up on the pillows. “So, did you get anything else?” This was my favorite ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Cosmos (Outer Space) Part 4
This is a very good story since this is part 4 it works for the other chapters. I really love the details and who you can let me be drawn ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Singer?
Who is your favorite singer
Jul 27, 2011 - Re: Love this Jul 27, 2011
-
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 14
Everything that you said in that sentence was insane. Did you know that?” he asked, trying to suffocate the last of his laughter. I shook my head, intent on looking ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Nightshade Chapter 3.5
“Good night,” she crooned, and planted a soft kiss on David’s cheek. Where she kissed him felt cold and lifeless and it sent a shudder down his back. She left. ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: El Protetor (Part 3)
It’s nothing like that. The rest of the world leaves us alone – do not go looking for trouble and it will not go looking for you.” They would say, ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Mythos (Chapter Six)
Angela looked at herself in the mirror. Her face was all sharp angles from the high-watt line of bulbs above the motel room double-sink and the yellowy light gave her ...
Jul 27, 2011
