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  • The Project - Opening (needs comments)

    ~I heard it again - another gun shot, cracking in the still autumn night~ Ma and Daddy are drunk, their still, lifeless bodies lay strung across the floor, Daddy's arm ...

    3 min read
  • And the war wages on......(updated)

    This is kind of the first story I acctually prepared before I wrote it. Anything you think needs fixing, please post! Main Character: McKayla Wallis Plot: McKayla has been living ...

    5 min read
  • One last chance.....

    When I climbled the mountain that morning, it was cool, the mist hung in the air over the tiny coves and crevices that had assisted me up. The sun had ...

    3 min read
  • - prolouge- The lost one

    This is going to be fairly hard to read because I pasted it from my computer and I don't have time to fix it. Laying in the dark. Silence encloses ...

    6 min read
  • The Cinamax - prolouge - opening statements

    The movie park on Willows and Son is a dark, shadowy place, halfway between debates of shutdown and possible federal agreements. Built in the late forties, The Willows Cinamax has ...

    4 min read


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