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Re: I Was His Slave
loved this, it had a great message and the first couple lines really got my attention! good job.
Thu Feb 04, 2010 3:20 am -
Re: not finished,good so far?
thank-you so much. I know I have a lot of spelling mistakes, I've never been a good speller :wink: oh well, when I have the time, I'll make sure to ...
Thu Feb 04, 2010 3:14 am -
Re: The Word of War
Have you got a clue what's worth fighting for? The pain overrides our pride. Needs of peace burried under the gun shells of battle. Beauty shattered by blood of the ...
Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:43 am -
Re: not finished,good so far?
-The streets are filled with children, playing their games awaiting the school bells of fall. Summers humid air fills my breaths as I walk the cracked and splitted sidewalk. -" ...
Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:18 am
