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Re: I Was His Slave
loved this, it had a great message and the first couple lines really got my attention! good job.
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Re: not finished,good so far?
thank-you so much. I know I have a lot of spelling mistakes, I've never been a good speller :wink: oh well, when I have the time, I'll make sure to ...
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Re: The Word of War
Have you got a clue what's worth fighting for? The pain overrides our pride. Needs of peace burried under the gun shells of battle. Beauty shattered by blood of the ...
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Re: not finished,good so far?
-The streets are filled with children, playing their games awaiting the school bells of fall. Summers humid air fills my breaths as I walk the cracked and splitted sidewalk. -" ...
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