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I thought you did a great job and this poem talks nicely about some very tough topics. The only thing that I can suggest is perhaps adding a little bit ...

I think that the idea is great, but it could have been written a little better. It seems like you tried to rhyme it in some places and then not ...

This is SO CUTE!!!! I love it and I think you did a great job rhyming it. I would never have been able to come up with a rhyme for ...

This is SO CUTE!!!! I love it and I think you did a great job rhyming it. I would never have been able to come up with a rhyme for ...

I thought that this poem was good! The only problem I have with it is that it gets a little hard to follow at the end. I really like the ...

This is so amazing! you an an awesome song writer. I would definitely get this on my ipod if it was actually recorded. I can picture Avril Lavigne or some ...

When I started out reading this, I have to admit, I didn't really like it, but it was truly amazing. I don't have any negative comments for it! I love ...

I really like it! At some points it is not completely clear about what you are talking about and it seems like you change subject matter a few times through ...

I love the poem. It is really intense and pulls you in. One thing that I didn't like was how you picked up a rhyme in the middle of it. ...