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Re: Part 1 ,"I'm not under your charm,mrs Lily"
Thanks Reisi! I'm not great at punctuation of I have already said,English isn't my native language. I am not getting discouraged , don't worry! I'll try to fix the mistakes ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: A Murderer
Hi Lili! I really liked your story. It was very captivating and entertaining. I especially liked this part "I finger the flick knife in my back pocket, searching the streets, ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Part 1 ,"I'm not under your charm,mrs Lily"
Thank you very much for the detailed review!!! This will encourage me a lot to post the second part as soon as possible. English isn't my first language but I'm ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Part 1 ,"I'm not under your charm,mrs Lily"
She entered the classroom with the same elegance and beauty that was typical of only her.Mrs Lily isn't a particularly beautiful woman. She doesn't really look like one . Tall ...
Jul 31, 2010
