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Re: Faith in the Fayth
Hello. My name is Yuna, former summoner. I defeated Sin long ago, and am a former sphere hunter as part of the Gullwings. The Gullwings consisted of me, my best ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Won't Go Home Without You - Andy Samberg - Chapter 1
Her mom, who was standing beside her the whole time, interrupted us. "Excuse me, but I need to check us in. So if you could move out of the way, ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Won't Go Home Without You (temporary title) - Andy Samberg
I haven't written in a while but I was just recently inspired to write some fanfiction spurred by my newfound obsession for Andy Samberg! "Won't Go Home Without You" is ...
Jul 9, 2009 -
Re: I Just Saw a Face
Chorus: How can I explain my heart Why do I keep smiling Does everything seem this clear Could it be I could be bewitched ‘Cause I just saw a face ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Is this not love?
this is adorable. only problem i have is that it confuses me when someone doesnt use the same constant rhyme scheme throughout a poem (with the exception of free verse, ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Fooled
This is April Fool's Day Anything goes You will get tricked Egad! This is not a real holiday! I walk to school Go into my classroom Sit down quietly at ...
Apr 1, 2009 -
Re: Take Me Back To 90's
oh, the 90s. good times, good times. 90s nickelodeon was especially the best. and the fashion everyone wore, oh my. i miss those says =/ anyways, i'd say this song ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Let Go
i love the whole message of this poem. i find it very easy to relate to. and it's good for you to get your feelings out in such a humane ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: An Ode to Google
this is brilliantly worded. it made me laugh a little, even. amusing, and true. i have no criticism for this!!! good job(:
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: No Match
this is a bit short, but that's ok. if you put in some punctuation, it would make it a lot better. and i don't really understand what the message of ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Edward Cullen
the only criticism i have is that it doesn't really seem to have any rhythn/meter. it doesn't matter that it doesn't rhyme. and try breaking it up and adding some ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Blue Ocean Eyes
this is really good. i like how you broke it up. there were a few parts that i didn't quite understand, like "i don't want to be another damsel on ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Bragging
My friend, she brags about meeting the Jonas Brothers- She has floor seats to their concert I don't My friend, she brags about a hot guy asking her out- She ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: If You Want Me
[c] If it's a letter You want I'll write it now If it's a song I'll sing it loud If it's attention I'll be around And if it's space You ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Out Of My Mind
i don't know if i really want to call this "out of my mind" so if you come up with something, just leave it in your comment... [v1] I'm gonna ...
Jan 18, 2009
