listeningforthemuse

This was great. You did a good job of conveying the emotions of your characters, and in only a paragraph or two you had me hooked on your plot. Which ...

Wow. Well, you spelled a few things wrong, it was kind of choppy, and you totally lost me a few times. But it was certainly original and I laughed at ...

I'll pray for you I'm so sorry; I can't even begin to imagine the pain you must have gone through...and might still be going through. Though this poem really captured...what, ...

Wow That was fantastic, inspiring, amazing!!! And all sorts of other adjectives!!! One day all the roses died. Not all at once, just a few at a time. Some knew ...

This was a great poem, though at some parts it was kind of hard to follow. I thought you were talking about how Romeo and Juliet came to love each ...

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Haha Man the story of my life - or any writer's for that matter. this was so creative and original! I loved the whole thing; and your rhyming stayed pretty ...

My most recent song, pretty self-explanatory. I know its kinda short. Hope you like! (please comment!) verse: I’ve tried to play your games And I’ve lied to myself everyday To ...

Wow I really wish I understood what was going on. Your wording was wonderful - I love how you described your memories. when you live in one place your whole ...

Definitely prosey. I liked it - it was like a smack to the face of young lovers everywhere. A bit rough; and a little too long. Needs a bit of ...

Wow Thanks for the great feedback everybody! Tusker93 was right; its a poem about how we spend our lives chasing meaningless things, and before we know it, its too late. ...

I wrote this from one of my character's point of view and I liked it. But I feel like something's not quite right.... Any and all opinions are welcome! ******************************** ...

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I liked this one. My favorite line was: Wind blows through orange flowers Glistening from light showers The imagery there was beautiful. Okay, lets get down to the nitty-gritty. Your ...