linkreborn

Confusion The mind works one way and the heart another, but when they work together something beautiful is created. Little can be needed to break this and much is needed ...

I have to agree with a lot of what Ayra has said so theres not much more I can say, other than a bit of punctuation can very helpful to ...

This was really good, the imagery was great, and it really pulled me into what was going on. I really like the idea of this poem too, very good, and ...

The One Who Walked Alone A boy walks the halls, seeming alone, traveling by himself, this is what others see. As they pass him by; they see a person, who ...

The imagery was very good in this, along with the rhythm and rhyme. I have to say I've always seen acrostics just simply being one line per letter, so it ...

you may want to change "stratosphere" to something a bit simpler, like "the heavens" for instance. It draws the attention of the reader and interrupts the rhythm for longer than ...

Part One I see a girl running in the night, from what, is unknown. Fearfully she runs into the woods to evade her pursuer. She runs, her dress is torn ...

Yea I've played quite a few of the Legend of Zelda games, Ocarina of Time was one of the better ones thats for sure. As to DA being a bit ...

So ya I'm new to this site and I guess you could say new to writing. Its only been in the past year or so that I've really started writing ...