lilldeh

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Hello timmy! Im lilldeh =) I liked the poems and how they contradicted each other. The first poem seems to flow better in my opinion, but i don't care for ...

It was a cute little poem but thats really all i saw it as. I really have no nitpicks, the grammar was good along with the flow. I just felt ...

Thank you all for your lovely review. =) Mizzle: Im sorry my poem didn't fit with well with you but thank you for taking the time out to review it. ...

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I'll dance on my toes, against the lustrous embers. Swinging my hands with my hips, like women do. You'll look at me from behind our fire, your sole tapping a ...

Here's a poem I feel we all can relate to. I am a writer, no matter what you say. Words flow from my pen, like blood flows from my heart. ...

I like this a lot, but you need to proof read and put some commas and periods into it. This poem seems very good natured and sweet to me, it ...

This short story was very confusing to read. I felt like it was a very good attempted at a short story but you made some fatal errors that just completely ...

I love this poem. I think it is written beautifully and from the heart. I can picture this perfectly from the way you wrote. The first stanza has to be ...

Iv never really read a lyrical poem and i honestly don't know how to determine what is good and what is not. I will say i do like the beginning ...

You haunt my life, living within the creases of my bones. Your words echo in my ears, like i heard them a second ago. Your unattainable lips, meet mine. Taking ...