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Re: The Protectors of the Elements chapter 1 Rebecca
In which dragons learn to fear 9 year old ballerinas It was the last day of school. Rebecca should be happy, but she knew something was wrong. After she left ...
Dec 20, 2011 -
Re: This Christmas.
You did a great job! Dogs said pretty much everything I had in mind, so take his advice! Everything dogs siad is true (even the a part about your avatar ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: The Princess and Fairy Tales
Yep you were is dark and silly, but good. You should write something like this but as a novel.I think they weren't any grammar mistakes, so practicaly it is all ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Void absence
Is it just me, or you are AMAZING in writing songs! I couldn't find any grammatical mistakes (I think...), so I'm only going to say KEEP IT UP! Send me ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Achilles
Great Job! You should definetly continue that, cause if you don't I'll cry. :'( You should make Thetis a bit more important. You also say I still remmember perfectly too ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter, Voldemort and a cookie.
Muahahahahaha you are a genios ;) The forbbiden forest should be in capital letters. And its hermione not hermone Lili
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: The Hogwarts Express
You did a great Job. I almost cry when I saw Lily and James still alive. You should make Harry Neville's friend, like a Ron. I once thought of somthing ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P
I really enjoyed it! You know I'm a Potter geek so you just made my day FUN! You should add Albus's letter in the next chappter, but the rest is ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Mr Harry Potter, sir
It is an Incredible poem! I LOVED IT SO MUCH! I am one of the biggest Harry Potter geeks ever so naturaly I
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: Palabras de un disidente
Thanks for the poem! You did a great job!
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: In the Arms of a Warlock - Chapter Two
It is a really good story.You should really continue that story.You made some mistakes: 1. . His black, wavy hair been cut short, should be :his black, wavy hair had ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: My dream trip
It is really good! I think its a great idea, but the not ryhming parts are a bit not good compared to the rest of the poem.You did a great ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Night Life
It is a good story! I can't believe Julia is the killer.She is the person I less suspected You are great keep it up!
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: An Ocean of Emotions
It is a great poem! I think it is dream. I don't think to be or not to be is a great title for your poem but the rest is ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: In the Arms of a Warlock - Chapter Two
You made a mistake here:, I felt liked dressing sexy instead of I felt like dressing sexy but the rest is good :)
Dec 11, 2011