lilgreendots

Hey Carls, Well first of all I'm sorry I'm so late with the reviews. With school starting and me starting seventh grade I haven't been paying very much attention to ...

Here you go thanks in advance -lilgreenodts

Thanks for the review it really helped :D -lilgreendots

Hi Tam, I just posted my first story so will you please review it for me -lilgreendots

This is my first story on YWS so PLEASE tell me what you think, and I don't mind harsh edits (it makes me a better writer). And also I was ...

Hey Tamara You drew this!!!!! This is amazing! I really suck at drawing which makes me love it even more! Awesome Job!!!! -lilgreendots :D

Hey Tam, Love the theme song we should definitely use it!!!! -lilgreendots

Hi Rae, I'm pretty new and I'm loving the site. I am positive you'll love it too! I was looking for a writer's website and I fell in love too! ...

Hi Carlito, Here's your review enjoy :D I thought everything sounded good. I had fun playing. These sentences seem sort of weak. You should combine them, and you should exchange ...

The vampire hissed at me, he was probably thinking I was after his prey. I turned to the human. Instead of saying he was just say probably thinking. I turned ...

Hello allmixedup, Here is your review enjoy You yourself have said no vampire is a match for me. I think it would be better to say You were the one ...

Welcome to YWS. You will LOVE it here I know I do :D. Feel free to pm me about anything (although I might not know a lot because I am ...

A lot of people already caught your other mistakes but I got a couple. Here is your review enjoy I smelt freshly cut grass by the forest, and the smell ...

Hello Writing Words This was so cute and fun to read. I can't believe you wrote this when you were six. My six year old brother couldn't write something as ...

This was really good! The formatting made sense and it was interesting to read. I'm just curious how long are you planning to make this because if you want to ...