lilgreendots

Colored Waters

8/10 I love the mix of colors.

Banned for having an awesome avatar.

Hi I'm lilgreendots but you can call me green, lil, dots, or dotsy.Welcome to YWS and I'll know you'll love it here as much as I do. Here are a ...

Thanks for the review, I don't really write poetry, but I was thinking about the poem I wrote and I just thought I'd post it for fun.

This is just a little Mother's Day poem I wrote in 6th grade...Enjoy When I was born there was love Mom looked like an angel sent from above She has ...

Sorry I forgot to write something at the very end so here it is: That was a great story. I loved the idea and it made me want to keep ...

Basically, I wanna see how far I can go with this. Rated for it's content. Sorry for the lenght. Length not Lenght She had never even though thought of romance ...

A Shot of Arrogance ~ Chapter One The official page thingy for A Shot of Arrogance. Join and you get a monkey. :smt001 “The important thing about a problem is ...

Chapter 1, My saviour. I smiled as the sun's warm rays tickled my face, fighting off the cold fall air coming from my sister's open window. Lord knew why Emma ...

Well I didn't see any grammar responses so I'll just do and overall response. This was a great story and I liked how you used the point of view to ...

~CHAPTER 1. ~ She watch as the train started to leave the station. Tears poured down her face. Her cheeks and nose where rosy red. She put her hand down ...

Hey Carlito, TheTruthLiesWithin pretty much covered the grammar errors of the story so here's my response. The story is coming out very nicely. There is a lot of suspense and ...

Hey Bookgirl, walked to the door and opened the door; Keenan was leaning against the wall opposite the door. H straightened up when he saw me. This is just one ...

Hey Carls, It's me again :D .This was really good and I enjoyed reading it. It has gotten a lot better from your first story and there really isn't much ...