lilgreendots

I looked as the two demigods knelt in front of me. "So you what to use my Chariot?" I asked my daughter and her friend .

Starting to read this it was good, until you introduced all these characters I got confused who was who and what they were even talking about. Try adding a background ...

“What are you doing?” said the young lady on the street. She slapped Him across the face. Another loss for Him. He was always told that he wasn’t good enough. ...

Hey can you please review this for me Thanks in advance! The title is Did I Drown, and it's a ballad, but it tells a story so I put it ...

Hey Isha, Can you please review this ballad for me Thanks in advance!

Hey can you please review this for me Thanks in advance!

Hey can you please review this for me Thanks in advance!

The piece I'm writing is suppose to be a ballad that is told through the tune of Gilligan's Island. It has to have a ABCB Rhyme 4 line stanza Repetition ...

I finished the review, anyone else?

Chapter One Florence sat on the park bench watching her drunken friends make fools out of themselves. It’s not like anyone else saw them- due to the fact that it ...

To be honest, I always figured the Mayans just ran out of stone. That's exactly what I think! It wasn't like the Mayans were going to keep writing calenders until ...

Skorpionne,done with the review.

Wow, this was really good. I liked how your poem seemed to have a purpose and it's not just a bunch of words that rhyme. The only thing that I ...

Banned for having 87 reviews, I'll get there someday =]

10/10, It keeps writing and never stops. It's like she never gets writer's block. If only I could have that =]