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lilchoma

  • Lyric Poetry Re: So Goes the Museum

    okay, so i agree with the above lady and gentleman that the poem is a tad difficult to figure out. i mean, dont get me wrong, i have poems like ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Turmoil

    i didnt take much time to try and understand this poem, which could take a while, so ill just say that i don't really get it. but that may be ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Скай към небе, живота и смъртта (Sk

    gosh i wish i knew russian. im one of those aspiring russophiles who have never gotten around to learning it. actually, i can read russian, like i can pronounce it ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Owens Allegory

    okay so i feel like i would really like this poem if i knew what it meant...but unfortunately, i really rot at figuring out what poems mean. the title caught ...

    Oct 21, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: After Rain.

    i very very much enjoyed reading this poem. the rythm flowed nicely, and although i didn't really take time to figure out the rhyme scheme, it seemed creative enough to ...

    Oct 21, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: J'ecris, Nous Ecrivons

    oh dear, that was a typo actually...and thank you much for your review, it was very encouraging...

    Oct 21, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: J'ecris, Nous Ecrivons

    Tap Click Tappity Clickity Clack Tip Off we go, Tapping away Words we can't say. Click tap Enter key Tippity clack, shift C. Spelling words, Meaning more, To know us ...

    Oct 20, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Rooftops

    okay well im really sorry i have to say this...i hate giving my opinion when it isn't very encouraging... but i have to say this poem isnt my favorite. im ...

    Oct 20, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My current favorite that I've written

    i feel like this poem is supposed to mean something, but i don't really get it. it is very well written in terms of language; it is very poetic. but ...

    Oct 19, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Killing

    very very good poem. first two lines and i was hooked, i had a vivid image in my head, and that takes talent, you know: when your reader doesn't even ...

    Oct 14, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Drop Of Peace

    i agree with scottieRAWR that this is quite a depressing poem, and i would encourage you to pursue happier thoughts, hard as that may be for you. however, i will ...

    Oct 14, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: childhood.

    okay so i liked this poem alot, in terms of it was just really cute talking about little things that kind of defined the time you grew up in, and ...

    Oct 2, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Lesser Things

    Queens and kings and lesser things Power and might and burdens light, Autonomy and more for me, How to fight and do things right, How to be completely free, Social ...

    Sep 29, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: I Marvel at the Work of Men

    i really really like this poem, you know. I mean, despite its length or rather lack thereof, you really made it work. I don't think it would need to be ...

    Sep 29, 2008
  • General Articles Re: Removed.

    well a little rant is a perfect title for this peice...and usually listening to people complaing isn't very fun...but i didn't mind it in this peice really. i mean, after ...

    Sep 28, 2008


How odd I can have all this inside me and to you it’s just words.
— David Foster Wallace