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  • Other Poetry Re: opposites

    I The opposite of dog's not cat , Though many people say it's that. It's opposite is global hegemony Which happens to be man's greatest enemy. II The opposite of ...

    Mar 1, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: It's a slip up, but it's real.

    i really liked this poem, actually :) i obviously dont know who exactly this poem is about, but it meant a lot to me since it sounded alot like a ...

    Feb 27, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Canyon

    alright clueless ( i feel very rude calling you by that name :) ) for me, this poem was just okay i suppose. i DID like the format of it, ...

    Feb 20, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Elisabeth's Prayer

    dear God, I'm feeling dark inside, and small and hurt and weak inside. I need a place to crawl and hide: a safe, still harbour at your side where unknown ...

    Feb 16, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: perceptional poetry 2

    okay im sorry, but i just don't like this poem at all. i apologize for being rude and ultra-honest, but sometimes you need to hear a little negative feedback. i ...

    Feb 15, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I'm on the mountaintop

    okay so i liked this poem in terms of its rhyme and rythm, you did a really nice job with that. it flowed wonderfully for the most part. of course ...

    Feb 13, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: who in the whispered breeze

    thank you guys so much for your feedback :) and in terms of the rhyme scheme, it was meant to be AA BB CC DD EE...etc. but i didn't like ...

    Feb 8, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: my newspaper

    well thank you for your feedback :) (i wish this thing would let me do a sideways smile like i want it. i dont like the yellow people) and im ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Poetry-Mist

    i hope you are not easily offended, because i hate offending people. and i am a very easily offended person. i hate giving criticism, but hopefully you can deal with ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Kids in the playground

    okay so i absolutely very much enjoyed this story. i mean, that sounds kind of messed up if you consider the underlying theme of it all. but truly, i enjoyed ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: my newspaper

    first of all, i would like to thank you both for your comments, and let you know that any feedback is always very much appreciated. next, i suppose i owe ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: my newspaper

    where is the battle i wonder gazing upon the sky * * where is the clashing the thunder the footsteps pounding by * * the aching sigh the triumph cry ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: who in the whispered breeze

    who in the whispered gentle breeze a still small voice can hear, then please enlighten all else with its words, please tell the brooks, and so the birds. please tell ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Seek Not My Heart

    i really really really loved this poem. usually im a happy type of person, and i dont do well with sad depressing poems which i usually find stupid and irritating. ...

    Feb 4, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Let Not My Eyes Wander

    good good poem :) im not gonna go around explaining to you how i interpreted it, but just know that however i did, i liked what i saw. i like ...

    Jan 31, 2009


You wake up in the morning and it feels impossible? Good. You do it anyway.
— Martin Scorcese