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okay so i have no idea what in heck this poem is about, or what any of it means, but i LOVED it. it was wayyyy awesome i don't even ...

actually i disagree with Black Night Werecat. now i don't swear, and i'm not for it or anything, but i actually didn't mind it in this poem. it really got ...

awwwww oh my goodness im like about to cry :( that was a WONDERFUL poem, and even though the picture at the bottom isnt actually a part of the poem, ...

hey music, thanks for being so cool about me spitting my beliefs out at everyone, im glad you're able to take it easily, even if you disagree. okay so more ...

okay i had a LOT of fun reading this poem, ill start with that. it was so fun to read like i read it in an english accent and everything, ...

"Unlike christian beliefs saying 'you shall no kill' which blatantly says, serial killers cant kill. And pedaphiles? No one is backing them up because they are hurting innocent children." okay ...

okay so i have NO idea what this poem is talking about but it is ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS. i LOVE it totally totally LOVE it. i dont know, your language is ...

okay so basically i really liked this. it was a little confusing with all of the grammar problems and junk that Proffessor Clever here mentioned, but i almost like it ...

okay so freaking AMAZING peice here. no joke. all the little nitpicks that people mentioned above, i think they should all be thrown into the garbage disposal, brought back up ...

okay well the rythm was a bit strange, and it didnt flow really unless you concentrate on saying it right, but thats the only critique i have. otherwise i really ...

i don't like ripping things apart, so i apologize in advance. but i very very very VERY STRONGLY DISLIKED this poem, which is a nice way of saying i hated ...

okay well im here to be the drenching rain on your little parade, im sorry to say. well sort of. i mean im not going to get all into my ...

you have SUCH a sophisticated vocabulary senorita rosa, which ive always been jealous of. i loved that aspect of this poem. okay maybe vocabulary isnt what i mean, its just ...

okay so first time through, i was like "the heck is this?" this person is crazy, and this poem is just too wierd. but then i read it through again ...

I The opposite of dog's not cat , Though many people say it's that. It's opposite is global hegemony Which happens to be man's greatest enemy. II The opposite of ...