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okay I didn't really get this poem. first of all, I know a lot of poetry gets along fine without punctuation, but I think this poem definitely needs some. For ...

This has to be one of the most interesting books I have every read. It's a non-fiction account of a woman with 17 distinct personalities, written by the doctor who ...

I'll start off with standard critiques, like grammar stuff. First, "Why am I sad Is it because am mad Or because I make my enemy glad" Needs question marks. And ...

kay so this poem was decent I thought. here's one of my problems though: "No worries though, for I am breathin'" if you're trying to make this guy be confusing ...

conrad and kylan, I generally don't handle criticism very well, but I would like you to know that I'm rather thankful for the critiques you both gave me. I especially ...

im not very talented at extracting deeper meaning from poems, so naturally I had a hard time understanding what this poem is supposed to be telling me. but that is ...

wow im like depressed now...okay so i liked the story in that it kept me engaged and was fairly well-written i thought. however, im having a hard time seeing the ...

Elegy / / Reality, Engulfing Sentimentality and Truth. / Inevitable, Non-negotiable / Petrifying and Enigmatic, An agonizing Cacophony of Ends.

hmm okay so i actually liked this one. it took me a few read-throughs to appreciate it, but now i think it's quite good. i especially like the last stanza. ...

like the vocabulary, very poetic. don't know what the heck this poem is telling me. atmosphere of this poem makes me uncomfortable.

okay so i really liked this poem :) even though there was no consistent rythm, i felt like you did just fine without it. in fact i think i like ...

okay so i like the idea of your poem, in terms of its being a quick burst of emotion (which i often find myself having to do). you do a ...

okay so my first thought when i saw the way you spelled things was "wow that's rather obnoxious". but when i read through the poem a couple of times, i ...

My shoeless feet escort me through the wood Where dampened soil tells of winter gone - Where songs of angels welcome in the dawn - Where wind is swift and ...

ouch darko, way to give helpful criticism. alright dogs, heres the thing: i don't exactly know what you were trying to do with this peice, but it's got a lot ...