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Re: Ther Series of Unfortunate Events
I absolutely ADORE these books :) Snicket's humor reminds me of a more modern, more concise version of Charles Dickens' humor. He's so amazingly and cleverly sarcastic. I LOVE when ...
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: I am more of ink than solid stuff.
very nice job on this poem, I rather liked it :) The first line is lovely, it reminds me of Shakespeare's use of the word "stuff", which ordinarily is a ...
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: The Best Book Ever Read
1. The Outsiders - S.E. Hinton 2. Peace Like a River - Leif Enger 3. The Catcher in the Rye - J.D. Salinger 4. That Was Then, This Is Now ...
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: Erase/Replace
umm I kind of have no idea what the heck this poem is saying. it seems a bit e.e.cummingsish. if that's the way it was meant to be, then okay ...
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
The worst book(s) ever read by me - Narnia series. I finished all 7 off them in 2 days -.-` and i had hard time following the action and the ...
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Okay I'm sorry, I had to comment again. The Series of Unfortunate Events is absolutely hilarious and I love Lemony Snicket to death. He's brilliant, I tell you.
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
GOOD GOD!!! I consider it a SIN to say that the Lord of the Rings was a BAD BOOK!!! Holy crap, that is one of the most wrong statements I ...
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: In the Eyes of an Abuser
I do agree with anime-girl about the long lines. I think the poem looks a little awkward with two words in one line, and twelve in the other. maybe make ...
Dec 23, 2009 -
Re: Portrait of His Funeral (reviews please?)
a soft slice of a shovel piercing the earth, and the hollow thud as it falls mercilessly onto the colorless, joyless wooden box. . the wind, strong and capricious, wrapping ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: Lose Yourself
I have to say that I found this poem a bit…I don't know, trite, or something along those lines. I mean the language was fine, all the punctuation was fine, ...
Dec 19, 2009 -
Re: heart dissection
wowza, that was quite a poem. and I mean that in a good way :) I thought it was beautifully disturbing, if you know what I mean: the language you ...
Dec 19, 2009 -
Re: Switching Time by Richard Baer
haha this is true, I suppose I was not very descriptive. I'm not really sure how to explain it. I suppose you have to be interested in certain types of ...
Dec 15, 2009 -
Re: An Excerpt from Shrive
im a bit in the dark here, wth is shrive?
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: Young Captive, Dearest Friend
Young Captive, Dearest Friend . . I hope you have a room with a view, once your freedom is safely buried beneath the sad weight of dark, wet earth. Preferably ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: Linguists
I actually rather liked this piece. I thought it was fun, what with the alliterations in the beginning, and it even made me laugh (I liked the Where is your ...
Dec 9, 2009
