lilchoma

Okay, so this is a pretty decent poem. I like the idea behind it, but there's some nit-picky stuff that just isn't doing it for me. In the first place, ...

. . What treachery is this? This, my heart, laid aside of its own accord, or perhaps folded in beneath its own weight. No longer can it squeeze, as it ...

Very well done, Lumi. The imagery throughout this poem is marvelous, and all the words put together are quite pleasant to read out loud. This is my favorite part from ...

Yes, the grammar was on purpose, don't worry. I originally started writing it in nice correct English, but it was just way too proper in contrast with the whole idea ...

actually for me, the first stanza was my favorite :) "I am- That is- What for? Because." it reminds me of what I sound like in my head when I ...

ded men dis where da ruff begin, dis where everybody sin. up in here we live, love, kill, see da bloody bodies lyin’ still, hear da moans and groans and ...

This is from an assignment I had in my acting class, whose instructions were to write a character analysis of myself, using the following questions as an outline: Who am ...

This is a character analysis I wrote for my acting class. We had to answer some specific questions, and though it was assigned as an essay type thingamabob, I chose ...

well actually, there is no artwork in this poem, nor museums. "Portraits of Alone" is an abstract term for all of the things that this guy sees everyday, and all ...

I think that if you are going to rhyme some lines, you should go ahead and rhyme them all. At least, I'm not a big fan of random rhyming. It ...

We Are the Mad Artist the portraits of Alone haunt me through the day. they greet me in the morning, shards of sunlight, happy jailstripes on the kitchen sink, drowning ...

I rather liked this peice. It was a nice creative take on death, and I particularly like the part about how paying attention is the secret to living well. That's ...

nice poem, I rather like it :) I just love the way you write, especially when I read it out loud, it has a nice sound to it. I can ...

I actually REALLY like this drawing, and I'm so jealous of your talent. The shading and texture is lovely, especially in the wings and hair. I have no idea who ...

Okay, no. The Perks of Being a Wallflower is most definitely NOT a good book. If you're sick of stuff being sexual and dirty, I wouldn't exactly reccommend that book. ...