lilchoma

This is a really nice poem, and I really enjoyed reading it. I like the organization, or rather the form that his has, how the first and last stanzas say ...

I really like the more sophisticated language that you've used in this poem, words like "amidst" and "shall". And even though it's a small detail, I love that you spelled ...

I enjoyed the rhyme scheme very much, and i liked that the descriptive language you used wasn't arcane like a lot of poetry tends to be these days...nice job

i like it. for a very first poem, this is great. i very much like that it has a rhyme scheme, but at the same time, it's not a solid ...

Hello, I just found this site via facebook, and thought that I would check it out becuase I enjoy writing and have actually been looking for a nice forum where ...

Oh, The Complexities of Joy and Love Tell her I'll be standing by, Make her look and see my cry Tears of joy, and let her try To love you ...

Fifteen Years Too Long I want to be in Texas, where the sun will always shine To hear a thousand crickets sing and see the stars at night. I want ...