lilchoma

KK, thanks for the advice, I'll certainly put those points in the back of mind for my next poem...and olivia, i'm really glad you were drawn by my title, and ...

Thanks for the advice. Yes, I realize that my title isn't very self-explanatory, so I guess I kind of wrote it for myself. The idea is that this poem is ...

Well thank you so much! I'm glad you decided to review something, becuase I love getting feedback (especially when it's positive and encouraging). Thanks!

Nice job on this poem. It's a good reminder to all of us of the little things that we take for granted every day, and it's really thought provoking. These ...

Wow...this was very, very well-written. I was hooked after the third sentance, and I was hooked all the way through. It was nicely descriptive in a way that doesn't bore ...

I really like this story, it is really cute. At the same time, though, it's really sad. I can't say whether you meant it to or not, but this story ...

As far as I can tell, this is good sounds really poetic and meaningful and all. The only problem is I have no idea what it means. Then again, maybe ...

Thanks for the welcome, Night Mistress. Gee, I wish I had come up with a more interesting name, now that I keep hearing other people's names. They're all so creative. ...

Thank's so much for the review...a paint just means a kind of horse, that's what i was talking about. And I know, I never really liked that last line with ...

Thank you so much for your encouragment. It really made my day!

Thank you for your welcome, and thanks so much for editing out my name, even though it was just a pen name anyways. It's just nice to know that you ...

Autumn baby, Born to fall (*laugh*) Wait - When did you get so tall? Last I looked You were quiet And small And since when have you loved the mall? ...

Thank you for the feedback, i really appreciate it.

I really love this poem, mostly becuase it sounds exactly like myself. I can totally relate to this kind of experience, and you just put it into a bunch of ...

Thanks so much for the review and advice. I really appreciate getting feedback on my work, because I don't often get other people's opinions. I usually just have to judge ...