lilchoma

wow, this was a really nice peice. i mean, it was crazy intense and all, but in a good way. even though i have read thousands or poems, books, and ...

wow, that was really spiffy. it was confusing obviously, but it was so much fun to read, that i didn't even mind. it was definately unique, but it was also ...

oh, im sorry if it came across that way...no, that's not what i was trying to say. i was just trying to get out all my frustrations with the world's ...

thank you, that critique was much more helpful...even though there were some things that i didn't agree with. i saw where you are coming from on the second paragraph, but ...

thank you galerius...i did realize before i posted it that it didn't quite look like a poem, but it wasn't fiction, and i didn't feel like it belonged under nonfiction, ...

I read in a book once that Eskimos have about thirty different words for love, and that each one means something special, something set apart from all the others. I ...

awww...this was a really sweet story, and i really enjoyed reading it. the way you described everything really pulled me into the story, and kept me there the whole time, ...

i really like was alot of fun to read because the imagery was so vivid, you did a really nice job on your descriptions. i'm sorry I can't really take ...

I really like this poem...its slightly disturbing, but that didn't bother me so much becuase it is well written, and tells an interesting story. your descriptions were very vivid, and ...

i really liked was very well written, and though some people commented on your repetition as a negative aspect, I rather enjoyed it. I thought the repetition was just part ...

this is a really sweet poem...it's just so much fun to read, and there is a certain tranquil, joyful atmosphere about it that i love. i can only make one ...

aww...this is a really nice poem. i mean, the content is pretty normal stuff, the kind of things that everyone thinks about, in terms of time passing by, but you ...

Bernadette, sweet Bernadette, please come outside and play The trees are turning yellow and red The summer will soon go to bed And everything alive and green The oaks and ...

I like this poem...it's short, but I think that's okay becuase it's just really simple and sweet...nice job.

wow, this poem is really good. it's so sad, but at the same time it is so encouraging and hopefull my favorite part is the last four lines: "Sweet child ...