lifetimewriter

Thank you, and I did find it helpful. Though I must say, this was a different way of telling the classic forbidden love story, I understand what you mean about ...

Very good, a little rough around the edges as you mentioned, but very good and heart felt. It shows what you feel without being hidden. Very clearly stated. What I’m ...

Great use of imagery, it makes it quite easy to imagine it. I agree with rayneisthename when she said that we all want to run away sometimes, and you captured ...

No one should be discriminated against for skin color, sexuality, religion, or where they came from! Coming from a student in public high school, where this happens quite frequently, I ...

Thank you for giving into your curiosity! :)

Okay, I got confused because I've replied to a lot of posts, but I guess only one was long enough. Thank you! :D

What are reviews? Can someone please help me??

By the way, I like your signature :D

Thank you ^.^ I don't know what sparked it exactly, the first verse just popped into my mind and I had to write it down, and it turned into "Innocent ...

I liked it, but I think it was a bit jumbled and not clearly defined. For one, capitalizing your i's would make an enormous difference. Also, like I said, it ...

Very fast paced and entertaining. Very enjoyable!!

Very nice dialogue, quite impressive, but I was a little confused in the end.

I love it, I'm not sure what it is, but I love it! Keep up the good work! :)

Thank you very much :) There is more to come!

This came to me randomly in the middle of the night. I hope you enjoy! :) You be black, and I'll be white, we'll paint the town grey, just for ...