lifetimewriter

Wow, I really like this piece! Especially how you call backstabbing friends "saviors" , because they really are. They really make you more aware of people. This is one of ...

Thank you :) I try to create a personal connection with each of my songs, so they actually mean something. Thanks for the review!

I agree, at first I was wondering why it kept repeating the same lines, but it really put passion and feeling into this piece. It really makes you feel the ...

Verse 1: She says she's fine/ but I know she's lyin'/ 'cause you can't be fine/ with that look in your eyes/ but she'll never tell you otherwise/ Chorus: She's ...

I really liked this piece. The only thing I can really critique is the capitalization. When the beginning words aren't capitalized, it seems somewhat unprofessional. But there is a lot ...

For a writing assignment, this is very good, and I really like the wording! It's a cloudy day in the mind of memory. ^^ I really like that! It seems ...

Heart hammering, soul stealing, breath snatching, mind numbing, body pulsing, adrenaline releasing; The dance floor is my home, my obsession.

Like I said, it was written a while ago. I was about twelve and it was one of my first tries. But thank you for the review :)

Great Expectations by Charles Dickens. I was forced to read it by my Honors English I teacher and was bored out of my mind until the very end. I've NEVER ...

I really liked this, especially the last line: Hesitation is lost, and thoughts parried away of whether you are the angel instead. This being one of your first poem, you ...

I really liked this! The last stanza was my favorite, especially Almost broken, as if it Was unable to love As locks should be able to. I love the metaphor ...

Thanks!

I really like this. You made very fine points, and the whole point of reviewing is try to help the writer, not point out every little thing you consider flawed. ...

Thank you both! And it could have been longer, but as I mentioned in the spoiler, I wrote this a while ago and I have a thing with leaving my ...

I wrote this piece a while back Lost, never to be found, heart shatters, hits the ground. Blinded, never to see again, heart bleeds, never wins. Torn, never to be ...