lexy

well too short... thats why no1 understands it. It isn't long enough to explain what you mean.... did you get bored or something?

i don't think she is nine!!! lol, i like it, infact I really like it but it needs some tweaking here and there. (see comments above) well done xx

i agree with the above. To be honest it was the first lines of each stanza that made it clumsy and even boring.... sorry, i don't think its "deep" or ...

and people say that some of my work has creeped them out. I like it and it has powerful imagery :D good job!!! the crack in the pavement stuff is ...

actually.... I rather liked it. Maybe people that haven't been in that situation can't relate to the feelings portrayed or whatever.... I dunno do I ... but. I liked it. ...

The jigsaw pieces blaze through his permeable eyes, pierced with glass[s]y[/s] soul-stars shoving their way through in bloody tears. He begs me to disentangle his hopes and dreams which come ...

Inside I know she’s bleeding Her bubbliness is just an act I wish I knew how to help her How to save her life from death (I like the alliteration ...

*hyperventilating* This is a flipping good piece of work.... if I could write like this... well, you know! Ok my favourite bit was when you said "because we're poets" it ...

When you left a link in my blog after I had had a ranting session about him this really cheered me up :-) Its really captured him... lol. And my ...

A lovers heart; Cut open. The serrated blade, drowned in blood. A lovers hand; Balled into a fist. Teeth grinding, Blood shot eye's. A lovers face; is frowning. a look ...

A crisp Autumn morning, with a chill in the air. I wrap my scarf arond me tighter. The crunch of the leaves, a colourful display. Like a sunset in the ...

*In memory of 2 of my friends who died last year after being swept away at Lulworth Cove*(November 4th 2005) -R.I.P- The sea had cruel intentions On that fateful day, ...

Mock me, Tease and manipulate me. I don't care. Control me, Possess and trick me. I'll close my eyes while you stare. You think you're stronger? The malice in your ...

Damian pulled on his yellow raincoat and let his mother button it up to his chin. She smiled a beautiful smile and kissed the end of his nose tenderly. "School ...

I'm having trouble with establishing that he is being molly-coddled by his mother although he is older i.e his mum buttoning up his coat for him and buying him velcro ...