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Re: Save the world....Today!!!
isn't red meat a good source of iron. people that are anaemic slightly and hate broccoli prefer to have meat. I don't wanna fuel this convo, but I spose the ...
Nov 23, 2006 -
Re: The Heiress of Rosings-prologue
wow, when are you going to post the rest????
Nov 23, 2006 -
Re: Screaming Roses
I wrote this when I was moody. Please tell me what you think of it. Roses scream The grass raided Blood gleams On its moist blades The silken flower Turns ...
Nov 22, 2006 -
Re: Tempus Fugit
I'll sit prune-faced in a courtyard, the eastern tract, thumbing the armrest of a bench, a shadow shepherding dawn down a western wall, legs crossed, agitating airs with studious kicks. ...
Nov 22, 2006 -
Re: Birthdays
I used to think the only way that time flew was [s]to[/s] by throw(ing) my alarm (clock) out (of) the window. On those cold and bitter nights I wake to ...
Nov 22, 2006 -
Re: No Words
I love the water melon bit, its a powerful bit of imagery (dripping off your tongue.) I suppose its the colours that made it real for me. Over all I ...
Nov 22, 2006 -
Re: your kisses
hmmm, poets have freedom so I've been told and when I went to a conference to see simon armitage that was the exact question I asked. "Is there a right ...
Nov 21, 2006 -
Re: (Untitled)
well actually....if you related to the poem in that way you may see it as depressing WHEN TO OTHERS it means something else. Like dissapointment........... a break up.............. don't just ...
Nov 21, 2006 -
Re: Memories
Intense relief rushed over me when I saw who was standing in the door frame of my room. His figure swallowed into the darkness, I squinted through my tears and ...
Nov 21, 2006 -
Re: To a dear friend
brad really rubs me up the wrong way! No I think this piece is good, I understand exactly what you are trying to do here and I see you have ...
Nov 20, 2006 -
Re: In the mood
you've definitely got to be in the mood. Otherwise you just don't get into your story line.....
Nov 20, 2006 -
Re: Love is a Falllacy
Whats with the racoon coat? lol. It was a nice read to pass the time xxx
Nov 20, 2006 -
Re: Writing what you know
I don't think he means just fiction. I think that he means like researching about something you don't know about and actually finding out about it so that you can ...
Nov 20, 2006 -
Re: your kisses
[/i] some of your kisses are tender, but those kisses have been; given, received, and delivered to others. I'm not a minority. As I melt into your arms. This kiss... ...
Nov 17, 2006 -
Re: i was alone
I was alone, until your whispers reached me through the wind. I was a lone-wolf, until you gently joined my pack. I never imagined that someone so... special could fill ...
Nov 16, 2006
