lexy

Ilike the way you have your character behind glass... as if everything she wants is on the otherside but untouchable. Great stuff :P

There are no limitations, To my celebrations of the coast. The water is smooth, And to prove it I can feel The soft as silk waves, I see a boy ...

Cady forgave me for seducing her crush last year. And since then we've put it behind us and we're great friends. But when I brought up the fact that me ...

why write it as "you." That was confusing. I couldn't relate to what the characters were gong through. Maybe writing it as "she" would have appealed more??? lexy x

I reached the edge of the woods and stopped by a gate to think. She had been backed up against an Oak tree, almost rejecting my sleazy advances, but she ...

Imogen had bounded up at that moment and asked me to introduce her. I looked at her trying to emphasise the fact that I wanted to be alone with him. ...

Playing with fire or playing it safe? Chapter One: Cady Harrison His breath on my neck was warm... and a scarlet red flushed upon my cheeks as his nose gently ...

This poem works.... short is GOOD.... if it was any longer it would put people off! I think its great... so what if the 1st two lines aren't yours??? Does ...

i liked the use of enjambement (the lines overlapping onto the next sentence) I also liked the lack of punctuation... made it flow better :D keep up the good work ...

puppies? dogs? talking? Ummmm I guess I could sugget to my sister that she reads it....... (she's six) I liked where the story was set though :) if that makes ...

its great. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work :)

I think its great. I read through it yesterday and encouraged my friends to have alook too. Keep up the good work..... lexy x

I need help. BIG help. I'm new and I don't have a clue how to get started on here. I have a blog??? whats next???? Any advice from kind helpful ...