lexy

Once upon a time I met a lie. She told me that I was not the truth. That I should rebuke and convert to her religion. She made "positive" criticism ...

hmmmm. ok.

positive criticism is nice... but actually commenting on the most of the piece and saying it needed changing??? Nope... It wasn't kind criticism. It was "I can do it better ...

judging by the persons comment before.... they think they could write it better than you??? But in my opinion... I liked it the way it was... and yeah, it made ...

love

like the style

good

who else is confused??? Put your hand up if you got lost in this poem??? No??? Ok then... put your hand up if you didn't get it... *my hand goes ...

nice work

uhhhh i'd love to praise this work.... but i can't. :(

nice......

interesting. at least its different!

slick!!!!

i like the simplicity :lol:

why blue??? Isn't the pink one more popular??? Wouldn't the pink one commit suicide first..... ? surely it being in the limelight would have lowered its life expectancy??? lol,good stuff ...