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I've made sure to read your other poetry after this and must say I liked this the most. It would be great if you wrote another with a rhyming scheme ...

Different imagery means different things to different people. We're all unique and individual and what we think about with an image is probably different from others opinions. I can see ...

You people are too coherent for me. I don't really follow this or understand it but it looks like everyone else knows what your saying. i prefered the 2nd paragraph/stanza ...

And I think it flows well even though its depressing. Yeah it would be great song lyrics but as a poem it stands in its free right. It made sense, ...

great topic! I like this. My mum is dyslexic and this is a true example of it! Keep up the good word. But maybe change the "list" at the beginning ...

I like the play on the words morning/mourning as well. Its the thing I spotted that I liked :) Good work! Flowed well and I have nothing critical to say ...

A job well done. I liked it although it didn't flow tremendously well.

*shrugs* None for me either x

I think as a new writer you showed some good talent in this piece. The format definitey needs some work... and the punctuation. But other than that I think it ...

you were mean about mine but I'm not one to hold grudges... it wasmediocre. Powerful imagery and stuff.

I like the iambic pentameter. Flows well and is a simple poetic rhyming scheme :-) Good work. :)

please?

please critique my work!!!!! I can't improve it wothout the comments!

emotional attachment here. I like it though it works. A few too many commas though... but other than that. Great work. Keep it up :D

romance! xx