lexy

moving schools? What a boring subject. Try linking ideas of the contrast. Say that one is nice and one is nasty and be really descriptive. Honestly, you'll be fine, xxx ...

I liked this, mainly because it was short... I absolutely hate the title though... lol. But I can't talk, I'm crap at title making. Anyway, here goes... What I liked: ...

Lol, this is funny. I love where you got the idea from. Well done, even thought the grammer is bad it makes perfect sense and you can see its done ...

I've written an accrostic previously. But this is not good. You haven't even spelled Emmerdale correctly. If you're work is like this when you're bored DON'T POST IT. If you ...

I really liked this; The fact that it was short made me soooooo happy. The word b r o k e n written like that was clever, The fact that ...

Ok, I'm gunna go through this bit by bit. please please take time ot edit your work, it can only get better if you try hard at it. What I ...

Well, this poem has potential thats all under wraps... Changes I'd make: ment= meant "the thought of wander away from this place" wandering away... (this would flow better) "no way ...

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Firstly I just want to say; This is really good. And I enjoyed it. What I liked: "and their silent stories." I like the alliteration and how it reminds me ...

HP all the way!!! Its more gripping, its got sequels.... it isn't so long and boiring and confusing!!!

1. HARRY!!!!! 2. Voldemort 3. J.K ROWLING 4. HP 5. Ron because he is so funny and also dumbledore with some of the things he says!!!!! lexy xxx

lol, short and sweet :D

Hey!!!! Hi!!! Have fun on this grrrreat site!!!!!!!! lexy xxx

wow u a crazy chick!!! L O V E T H E R A N D O M N E S S ! love lexy xxx

Hi, welcome to the YWS. Spose I better join in too. Age: 17 Starsign: I'm sometimes a Libra and sometimes a virgo. I'm on the cusp. Year of: The snake!!!!!! ...