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Re: A Tribute to Harry Potter
A letter started it all. The boy who lived was my safe place. I found comfort when I was laying in a hospital bed, or out of school for weeks ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: Love I (Decay)
this in geniunely exceptional. I couldnt have phrased a situation such as this more beautifully. you are extremely talented. I love all of your work and I truthfully believe that ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: Lesson in Breaking
This was genious. Brilliant. It showed such an amazing perspective. I believe that the meaning could be transformed to fit most peoples idea and thoughs. For example, for myself, I ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Peeled Naked
it was, in fact, a very unique way of describing something sensual. It allowe the reader to understand and invision the scene to there own liking. It was sexual but ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: What would I do without you?
Your revised rhyming is a bit better. I, however, as it appears you do, perfer to write poetry without rhymes. I feel they portray the message just as weel. You ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Lies.
Three people are innocent and you are guilty. But to you, we're the ones to blame. You make us feel your lies as deep as possble. You start them, then ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
My favorite book(s) would have to be the Harry Potter series. As childish as it may seem, my love is not only for the story but the beautiul way J.K. ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Secrets
i liked the overall theme of the poem. Although, it all seemed too forced. it didnt flow very well. it seemed more like you were trying to make it rhyme ...
Jul 2, 2011
