lexieells

This was amazing. I, as well, feel very deeply about the series. The way you wrote about the books and movies is exactly how I feel as do billions of ...

it was a good poem but i found the metapohors a little confusing. also, you had quite a few grammatical errors. it also kinda of bothered me that you had ...

it wasnt bad... i think that you relied a little to much on rhyming. but for your first poem, it was pretty good. the conceot if your poem was interesting ...

i liked it(: even if it was just for a laugh i though it was very composed. if you took it seriously, I think you could write a true worthy ...

my only big issue when reading it, as far as the wording, I dont like how you say "nice" twice in the second line of the chours. I'd change that ...

I liked that you were willing to express something so personal. That in itself says a lot about a poet. In regards to this sepcific poem, I think that it ...

I felt that this is quite a powerful piece. It demonstrates emoition and deals with something that a little of lovely ladies deal with when they are younger and even ...

Your eyes, as blue, yet as cold as the icy pond that lay outside. pierce into my soul. Your skin, softer than the blanket that fits gently to our bodies, ...

I liked it a lot. The idea of it. I do think you should finish it though. Good start. -Lexi

I too love this. It is writte beautifully. I understand how youre feeling...I know you dont want to hear that or dont think its true..but trust me, Ive been there. ...

I really did enjoy this. I found it slightly confusing toward the beginning when you talked about his "only having eys for Garret". I wasnt sure exactly what you meant. ...

***this is an article I've prepared to submit. Harry Potter was one of the choices in the topic suggestions, so of course, I choose that. I'm open to critque. Be ...

I do, genuinely, appreciate your critisisim. However, though some parts of your response are completely right and partly due to my lack of expierence, I have to disagree with one ...

thanks so much for your support and suggestions. i consider each and every one of them. what do you guys think about the edit?? lemme knoww!! _Lexi

thanks, you helped. and you were right about "cease"...sorry about that...but i am aslo quite wiped. thats where most of my mistakes came from. ill fix them. thanks a bunch! ...