lexieells

Hey! So i really liked this. However, I think that you should try to put more emotion into it. It seemed to skim the surface of what you were trying ...

Hello, I really like this. I only have a couple of critques. First of all, I think that it's a little rambley in certain places. Exapmle; I’ve seen the rise ...

This is really very good. As ther reader, I can feel the anger and the confusion behind it. Yet, at the same time it isn't specific. So I can develop ...

In the passenger's seat, I take my position. Bullet engorger. These words- Your words. are being sputtered at me as though I am the elephant you lept from. The metalic ...

I am more than what you perceive. My skin will forever be covered in the tracing reminders of my past. If you held me you could feel no difference. But ...

Hello! I loved this poem. And it's shortness doesn't leave much room for error. But I'm going to be super picky here and see what I can do to help. ...

Hi There! I don't have a lot of time, but I really liked this and I want to get in a review. So here it goes! My comment and suggestions ...

Hello there! I wanna start by saying that I really loved this. My comments and suggestions are as follows. Your fingers trace the scar ; t he secret I held ...

I though I loved you, but you hurt me,I tried to love you and,all you gave me was pain,you made me happy for awhile,but messed it up by making me ...

Personally, I love this poem the way it is. But it's so good that I want more. That seems a bit confusing. But basically, I would love it longer or ...

Hello, to start out--i liked the idea of this. As twisted and strange as it may be, it has great potential. It sort of reminded me of a perverted Edgar ...

I'm not sure what to say about this. At first it kind of struck me as one of those peoms where people will just throw together analogies and metaphors hoping ...

hello! i enjoyed reading your poem. the concept was something i can relate to, which drew my attention to it. however. the overall layout was a bit...unorganized and sloppy, in ...

well...ill get straight to it- with all do respect, this was not good. i understand that it was suppose to be a parody--but that made it seem like you were ...

Thanks so much for all the reviews and likes guys!! Im so honored to have this piece be a freatured work! Keep the reviews coming! Crtique always welcome! -Lexi:)