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Wow, I loved this. A history lesson in about 30 seconds. We are Egyptian We are dances of joy We are feet bouncing, lifted heads so high they create perforated ...

Your poem really flows nicely, I loved reading it. You should definitely enter it into a contest on YWS!!! About coping with weather or something along those lines!! Again, your ...

this is my favorite poem of yours, I call it, hahaha. It speaks so much to those with poor self esteem!!! this could be a poem that girls read to ...

The way you wrote this poem, and the mood that you set. It was just amazing reading your poem, really. This poem would be good in a frame, anyway. The ...

Your poem is beautiful and poetic!!! I couldn't find any errors with anything. I loved the imagery, and the following reviews I am going to do for you will mainly ...

The rhymes were a little off, and the poem went by a little too fast. But all in all I loved reading it. It seemed like something light you could ...

I liked this poem, it had a homey feel to it. Like apple pie or orange juice. I loved the first stanza, it introduced your poem well. Your poem is ...

At first I wasn't going to read and review your poem because it seemed so long, but once I started reading the words just flew by. Because you drew me ...

This is sad, but beautiful at the same time. you should definitely make this into either a novel or a series of poems. The was so good that I am ...

First off I would like to just say that I love your imagery I love it. This poem is beautiful and it has a summery feel to it. It feels ...

Wow, the imagery in your poem, the first thing I noticed, is simply amazing. Your poem should seriously be featured. My favorite part just has to be this: You lured ...

This poem rocks, really. The imagery and the way you describe this boy's pictures. I love the ending the most. I think this poem could be called Capture Hearts or ...

I love the rhymes in your poem, soft and very poetic. I also like the image of a sad girl, her heart broken, comforting herself. This is a very good ...

Wow, I was leaning, actually leaning, into my computer screen. The story keeps progressing and getting better and better. This is the type of book I would love to read. ...

I loved it, it's better without the stanzas, it's like your really rushing to write your thoughts down before "she" comes. Like you're trying to put all of your mingled, ...