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Sweet, I love this, he looks good in black and white!!!

Ooh, the colors are pretty!!! fit for a Princess Mermaid thing, good job on this!!!

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Did you guys ever think that this poem was meant for emotion. If you were surprised or happy or scared, you would do that too.

I didn't expect this poem to be so, BOOM, you know. Straight to the point, no leading you there, just pushing you. And I, for one, loved it. The meaning ...

The lyrics were true, and I found your chorus to be a little weak as you mentioned beforehand. But I really loved it, nonetheless, you did a very good job. ...

this poem is epic!! Seriously the imagery was so spot on for the mood you set with the stanzas!! And plus I read this poem seems to be made for ...

This poem is captures your message, really. Good job!! the imagery wasn't bad, either!! My favorite part is When no stars are visible and nothing shines, like my eyes. Barren ...

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This piece is beautiful and well written. The imagery and the way you arranged the words are what's best!!!! I enjoyed reading this!! Keep writing!! This was also a good ...

*Cries* This was beautiful, like a story in, let's just say, 30 seconds. The imagery and the way you described the sunsets, like watching a portable brain t.v, if that ...

Wow, this was beautiful, I really liked reading the ending. Again, as I have said many times, great imagery. Has this story ever been featured??

Wow, so she ran away and is with some random guy. Hehehe, I wonder what's going to happened next. I have to go read the next chapter!!!!! this is absolutely ...

You have amazing imagery, as I'm sure you know by now from your comments. Your an amazing writer, and I like what you've turned this series into. Good job!!!

Cliffhanger much. I didn't expect him to murder her, I thought he would just threaten her. Phew, this is a good story!!! Nice job. But, seriously though, your good at ...