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Re: My true love
True words in every. What do you call them? I think its a verse. well, I truly appreciate a fine choice of words such as yours. And I don't have ...
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: Web of Lies
I really like the moral of the poem. Go on my blog ( and I'm not just doing this to advertise) and read my poem And Nobody Can Tell. It ...
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Re: I Felt It
i like it. I think that it brings an air of appreciation to YWS.
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: Random Thoughts
No no no, it was perfect. You did not use the wrong time. I love it, it has such motive, such a thing that explains those personal moments where you ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Which Way Prologue and Chapter One
I like it. I think that you should continue it, I love it. No lie, I am not just doing this to get points.
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Patience chapter 1
I like it very sad, though. I feel like you should bring nick back. Even though I know you will. Sad but well written same for chapter 2, too
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Trying to Define Art
wow really creepy and Stephan King-sh. But I know the moral and the motive and the tale you are trying to tell. I like it personally. I like it and ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Imagination
don't get stuck in imagination. he or she needs to be in your reality. I just rhymed put that in there.
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: 0NE LOVE
cool someone. I like it. are you a rapper you need talent to perform that rap
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: My boy
so much feeling but you really want to kill her. while you go to jail rememberer your man can be getting it on with someone else even though the first ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Life is short… and sometimes a little crazy.
So ture. check out my poems on and tell me what you think. They have a similar motive and moral. So i have the same username. so yeah
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: No. 5
so ture.
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: The Locket
i hope to collect lockets. But about the poem or whatever you call it. Amazing i like the soul of it. Did that happen to you not to be a ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Dream
okay okay okay you totally need to do something with that. Is it a moral or did someone really fall off of a building or something. either way, person. you ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: What Words?
true said and the words are even sadder than the moral. You need to make a poem book. or become a songwriter for one thing.
Feb 28, 2011
