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  • Lyric Poetry Re: My true love

    True words in every. What do you call them? I think its a verse. well, I truly appreciate a fine choice of words such as yours. And I don't have ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Web of Lies

    I really like the moral of the poem. Go on my blog ( and I'm not just doing this to advertise) and read my poem And Nobody Can Tell. It ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: I Felt It

    i like it. I think that it brings an air of appreciation to YWS.

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Random Thoughts

    No no no, it was perfect. You did not use the wrong time. I love it, it has such motive, such a thing that explains those personal moments where you ...

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Which Way Prologue and Chapter One

    I like it. I think that you should continue it, I love it. No lie, I am not just doing this to get points.

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Patience chapter 1

    I like it very sad, though. I feel like you should bring nick back. Even though I know you will. Sad but well written same for chapter 2, too

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Other Re: Trying to Define Art

    wow really creepy and Stephan King-sh. But I know the moral and the motive and the tale you are trying to tell. I like it personally. I like it and ...

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Imagination

    don't get stuck in imagination. he or she needs to be in your reality. I just rhymed put that in there.

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: 0NE LOVE

    cool someone. I like it. are you a rapper you need talent to perform that rap

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: My boy

    so much feeling but you really want to kill her. while you go to jail rememberer your man can be getting it on with someone else even though the first ...

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Life is short… and sometimes a little crazy.

    So ture. check out my poems on and tell me what you think. They have a similar motive and moral. So i have the same username. so yeah

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: No. 5

    so ture.

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Locket

    i hope to collect lockets. But about the poem or whatever you call it. Amazing i like the soul of it. Did that happen to you not to be a ...

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dream

    okay okay okay you totally need to do something with that. Is it a moral or did someone really fall off of a building or something. either way, person. you ...

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: What Words?

    true said and the words are even sadder than the moral. You need to make a poem book. or become a songwriter for one thing.

    Feb 28, 2011


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